Praise
What readers are saying about Jack, Ruby & Mia - every quote links back to its public source.
Literotica ratings
Reader ratings for the series on Literotica (username HaleWoodsWrote). Literotica marks anything over 4.5 as Hot.
In readers’ words
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Crazy good writing on both parts. 10/10, this is professional level shit.
Mickle_da_Pickl · Reddit - Chapter 2
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The quality of your writing, storytelling, everything here is off the charts… God damn, it’s good. -your new fan
weakknees · Reddit - Chapter 2
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This is incredibly good writing. The pace, tension and characterisation is excellent… and let’s get to it, it’s just so damn hot. 🔥
Haunting_Excuse1547 · Reddit - Chapter 3
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I really didn’t want this to end. Totally engrossing. Brilliant tension, great characters and damn sexy.
ChunkyLumber · Reddit - Chapter 3
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A masterclass in smoldering temptation.
r/eroticliterature Community Newsletter · Newsletter - July 2026 "Writer’s Desk" feature
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That was one hell of a ride!! Your writing skills are excellent!!
Able-Maybe8813 · Reddit - Chapter 1
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The ending sealed the deal, this was FANTASTIC.
spencers_corner · Reddit - Chapter 1
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I absolutely loved the buildup, the character plotting, the narration, quirks and what not… basically every single word felt just so perfect… I love your style.
Madhuban567 · Reddit - Chapter 2
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This is the best series ever. Thanks for writing.
24pathfinder · Reddit - Chapter 3
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What a great rendition of older guy and young girl - teasing but real dialogue, erotic scenario and happy ending.
Will527 · Literotica - Chapter 1
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“Oh what a tangled web we weave / When first we practice to deceive.” Sizzling riptides on this story’s shores.
pcman1950 · Literotica - Chapter 2
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Terrific writing and thinking and feeling!
Only_Salamander2495 · Reddit - Chapter 2
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The dialog and character development are way beyond the norm for this site. The author joins that small group of high-quality, talented writers. A unique story line also. Kudos!
Anonymous · Literotica - Chapter 2
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I LOVE that the wife was okay with it and he knew she would be! Gosh that is so well written. Love the mix of taboo and wholesome. Following!
SensualSyren · Literotica - Chapter 1
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Excellent!!!!! More please
jlk925 · Literotica - Chapter 1
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Another banger of a story - really wonderful writing with interesting and lovable characters!
Anonymous · Literotica - Chapter 4
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Your writing - both style and in the excruciatingly masterful dialogue - puts this far above most of the other drivel I put myself though reading here.
Anonymous · Literotica - Chapter 2